Quote Originally Posted by f6fhellcat13 View Post
The b&W is pretty awesome, no improvement needed.
The second one seems a bit off to me. I think that the rocks on the ground screw with the eye and somehow detrct from the shape of the car. Maybe blurring or turning down the contrast on the rocks would help.
I have next-to no photograhpic expereience, so take this with a grain of salt.
My 2¢
I think you should've open up the aperture to blur the background and foreground (the rocks on the ground) making the car the obvious focal, do you have the . And get a bit more of the car in the photo. Turn it around?

Do you have ISO, f settings, exposure available?